Give Me Inteligence

[Allison Sandings]

Give Me Intelligence
Lack of reason
Today's generation, the flow of important knowledge is running so dry
Why is every conversation so pointless
and dull and mindless and pointless and the same
can't there be much more to be expanded on.
Why does half the people in this world not give a care,
Oh why, oh why, oh why, oh why, oh why, why why.
It's like a God has smuttered and crushed everyone's brains and commands the crowd not to think.
Oh, how, oh how, can we survive this wide wide world with all these fools in it. Should we jump around pushing them around like robots or wait until they all drown themselves in nonsense.
Oh how, should reality be achieve
oh no one wants it
and no one wants achievement
no one wants achievement
No one wants Achievement
no one wants achievement
achievement
Achievement
achievement
achievement
achievement
and happiness
happiness
happiness
happiness
Oh happiness!

[Sister Grimm]

The repetition for effect is interesting, but it might work better if you cut that a bit.

(who am I to say?)

I think it's great, though!

[Allison Sandings]

Thank you!! You are the first reviewer to notice the repetitiveness is for effect and not to annoy people. Really everyone's asking me why I wanted to annoy them.

[Sister Grimm]

Oh, that's nice of them to say. (not)

[Allison Sandings]

It was just rather difficult to comprehend and to this very second I still don't get why they would desire or would simply ask that type of question. Why do they see people who were outspoken as wanted to annoy people, and hate them out right. I have a few more stories and one actually has to do with a teacher (I think it's sad for a actually grown woman, and as she claimed, a person with a masters in teaching, to say what she said to me) but I'll tell them in another thread. I'll creat that one shortly.